Essay changes + focusing

After having a proper analysis of my essay draft feedback and talking the direction through, I feel that due to the theories I have been looking up, the books I've been reading and the essence of my question, I need to direct my focus in terms of the journal and the essay, in the direction of an analysis of society and social media. I think the strongest parts of the essay are those that talk about the impact of social media on peoples mental states and how we perceive each other in an age where everything is connected and immediately available.