Essay Feedback - going forward

• put titles in italics, reference the year published/said
• remember to either put a space between paragraphs or indent
• use of quotes to start paragraphs is effective, find some that sum up the paragraph and start with them and then break them down
• explore the psychology of audience mentality more - why do people require a sense of safety (its probably Freudian)
• Introduce scholars don't just put their name, could be anyone
• work harder to integrate the quotes into the body of the text - like a pie - everything is mixed in, cant just plonk all the cherries on top can you?
• ITALICS FOR MOVIE TITLES TOO
• reference specific comic books, dont assume the reader knows (they aren't a nerd loser like you)
• link case studies more directly to themes and context, direct connections to provide synergy throughout the essay
• try to stay away from opinions, form counter arguments more often to display an impartial evaluation
• make the case studies flow into each other in some way so the chapter feels cohesive, not just one after another
• link case studies together in accordance with how they link to the themes present in chapter 2
• delve into the psychology more, storytelling as a human preoccupation, why?
• The Hero's Journey - Joseph Campbell
• assess changing media, how people respond to films - youtube reviews, rotten tomatoes, news sites dedicated to pop culture, hard to escape and form your own opinions